Your Mouth ( a dodoitsu)
Cringe- I fear the openingof the red, fleshy portalit's spineless daggers and itslying tongue- Your Mouth.Autumnal Red~'Worcestershire' looks like it should have more syllables....
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I've known a few mouths like that Clever and creative piece, Red! Enjoyed this!~ Bruce
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This is really creative and very good and I know some mouths like this too. Well done!I recently published three books through iUniverse.comYou can purchase a copy of my books "Poeternitry," "Fancy...
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Oh I like, another spin on the mouth so to speak great write.-Savage I have not winced or cried aloud, under the bludgeonings of chance, My head is bloody but unbowed. Invictus ~William Ernest Henley~...
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Hey thanks everyone, for commenting.. I was pretty upset at the time.. wrote this from memory if you will, trying a short form, on a short fuse.......Autumnal Red~Red- is the color of many fires.
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